Tried a club beat, still learnin' so good reviews are needed

My best track so far... my brother might spit on

I actually spent time on this... plz rate and REVIEW!

Gettin better in FL, but I still suck at Acid. please review

Don't know if i should make a melody or keep it like this plz review

First real beat if ppl like it I'll finish it

It only took a minute...